FCAs Angel Calisay
1.Supporting details March 31, 2011
2.Parallel structure English 6-1
3.Sophisticated vocabulary School uniforms
Dear Superintendent O’Malley,
“Experience should teach us to be most on our guard to protect liberty when government’s purposes are beneficent. The greatest dangers to liberty lurk in insidious encroachment by men of zeal- well meaning, but without understanding,” is one of the many famous quotes said by the late Chief Justice Brandeis. This quote explains that uniforms which would be a new experience for student and that it is very beneficial to take a risk once and a while to see what the effect is. On the other hand, when parents buy uniforms, they still need to buy religious clothes and various clothes for other purposes. Uniforms should be required to be worn in school for all grades and ages. In most cases, uniforms can help prevent or decrease bullying, helps students focus and helps identify people by their status in side the school such as students, teachers, and outsiders.
Clothes are one of the reasons why people bully others. When a bully spots someone who is wearing something that they do not approve of, they will start to bully that person. When wearing uniforms, everybody will have to wear the same thing, even the bullies. If, they make fun of someone about clothing choice, they will be offending themselves too. Sometimes bullying gets out of hand although, with uniforms bullies have one less thing to bully you about.
Teenagers are very insecure about the way they look because of the opinions the people around them give. With uniforms you wouldn’t have to stress about the way you look or the way people look at you. It is a proven fact that uniforms help raise grades by two letter grades when students are focused. Learning should be something that is focused upon and not bothered about later on.
Lastly, uniforms help students identify students who they are. Other than students, uniforms will also tell you who the staff and the outsiders are. People who do now wear a uniform will stand out and easily be located. The more safe the students are, the more they can focus. Even though students can not express yourself enough when wearing a uniform, it’s the inside of the person that counts. Uniforms can make the students feel safer because, they can identify their classmates and stay away from the right people.
School uniforms are mandatory in order for students to do better in school. Hopefully, bullying will prevented, students will focus on
schoolwork, and that people could be identified in school when wearing
uniforms.
Sincerely,
Angel Calisay
