Summer Break :)

The last day of school, students are always excited for their break. Two and half months are all they get for their break after ten months of school. Is that fair? I think not. Many people believe that if the students had more time for break, that the students would get time to study, be free, and even change. 
                 First of all, more time for summer, more time to free study. The students/children will have time to get ahead of the lessons. Opponents argue that the children might just spend their time playing and having too much fun to even study. Although, they might even pick up a book or two, even if by force of the parents it would still count as learning. 
                In addition, during the long break that the students look forward to, they can be free from the teachers, the homework, the PRESSURE.  They can have time to be kids at all times. Play, eat, read, and sleep can be their only routine if they wanted to. Opposing parents might argue that too much freedom can result in laziness and one day the students might not even care about their surroundings although, many students are responsible enough to know what is an appropriate for their freedom and the limit of their basic foolishness.
                Lastly, children can change during a long period of time no matter what age they are. They can be better, more caring people during the time summer gives them. Opponents might argue that people can change both ways, good and bad. Children are children  and faith decides the way that they change, and faith usually chooses good. 
                 It is evident that a longer summer break can give someone a chance to study, be free and change.

1 comments:

Krutika said...

Angel, this was a good post, but I know you could have done better. I know your abilities. You should add more details to all your paragraphs. The concluding paragraph is way too short. Also, next time do not use the word "I." Overall though, you did a great job.

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