FCAs Angel Lyn Calisay
1. Thesis statement December 22,2010
2. Three reasons to support thesis English 6-1
3. Conclusion Persuasive Article
All-Day Kindergarten On The Rise
What used to be three hours of kindergarten is now six. Research
shows that 39 out of 50 states support this new hour change. People felt the
need to extend the hours because the children barely had time for learning
during those short hours. Teachers were able to get educational experiences
such as field trips and learning the alphabet when the people at the
department of education approved all-day kindergarten schools to be
opened.
A majority of voters said that all-day kindergarten schools might have
ranged from $50 to $150 for enrollment fees. Most of the anonymous voters
explained that their experience in an all-day kindergarten school helped
them academically during first grade.
Even though this kind of school hours may be helpful to the children’s
minds, it will also tire the young kids. Children that are aged below eight
years old need their rest frequently or their focus will be gone.
Kindergarteners or young people need to rest for concentration, and how can
they do that when their at school during their usual time to nap. Well, they
can’t.
The quote “It is impossible for a man to learn what he thinks he
already knows,” relates to the experiences in kindergarten because you can
never learn too much. There will always be something that you don’t know.
That is the purpose of kindergarten, to prepare you for the future, to help you
gain the knowledge that you will need.
Education is something that we all need. People who attend longer
hours of school no matter what age they are, end up getting more knowledge
than those that attend half- days. From what my research has told me, eight
out of eleven anonymous voters responded that both types of kindergarten
times, half and all-day kindergarten, will get the same amount of students
enrolled in the future. Two out of eleven argued with the idea of having the
equal amount of students in half days than all-days. Their opinion is that
more students will attend all-days. The last vote went to the idea of having
more students in half-days.
When you become and adult and have kids make sure to consider
enrolling them to an all day kindergarten if you want them to move at a
faster academic speed than other kids. Believe in what your children or
siblings can do. They might be able to accomplish more than you could ever
imagine if they receive the right amount of education.
Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.
Nelson Mandela
1 comments:
Nice job, Angel! This persuasive essay is really great. One thing I really liked are your arguments. They were strong. I also noticed that you had many paragraphs. That is great, but sometimes you can combine a few. I think you should have kept your whole introduction one paragraph. I did not think that it needed to be a couple of paragraphs. All in all, you did really good. Do not take the negative things in a bad. Just keep them in mind next time.
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